英语的一封信四年级60字左右—一封英文信四年级

上海中考英语145（助力高中）免费助力上海学生中考英语达成145分以上，重点突破与达成以下目标：

1.听说测试达到满分（复述与表达），

2. 写作达到A档18分以上

3. 听力语法词汇阅读达到扣分2分以内

4. 为高中四大题型打基础（翻译与概要写作、语法填空，词汇填空和完形填空）

提示：

（1）上海中考听说测试2023年开始将从目前的10分增加到15-20分，用来筛选学生的意图更明显。

（2）上海初中英语从2023年开始将改版，目前用了将近20年的牛津教材将成为历史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，对学生的能力要求更上一个台阶。

今天开始发几位基础薄弱初三学生的作文修改（坐标：杨浦区内最底层的学校之一，定位：100-110）

只有同辈作文，才能深有感触；只有对比原文和我的修改稿，才能懂得写作之道。请珍惜最最最干货！

A letter to my retired teacher (告知学校发生的变化）

修改前

Dear Mr Wang :

Hello! Mr Wang. You have been retired for one year. First, I am thankful to everything that you did for our school. Without your hardworking, the school can’t be as wonderful as nowadays. And then I’d like to tell some changes of our school. The school buildings have been rebuilt. It has a garden on the fourth floor now. It’s enjoyable to have a walk in the garden after class. And we have a new canteen which is air-conditioned. The most important is our classrooms are more wider and brighter. It’s comfortable to stay in the classroom and have a lesson. Our school is better and better. You must be very proud of it!

Yours Kevin

修改后

Dear Mr Wang :

Although you have been retired for one year, I am still thankful to everything that you did for our school. Without your hard work, the school couldn’t be as wonderful as it is now. There have been many changes in our school. The school buildings have been rebuilt. It has a garden on the fourth floor now. It’s enjoyable to have a walk in the garden after class. Besides, we have a new canteen which is air-conditioned. Most importantly, our classrooms are wider and brighter and it is comfortable for us to study in it.

Our school is getting better and better. You must be very proud of it! We are all look forward to seeing you again in the beautiful campus soon!

Yours Kevin